ehhhhhhhh.. this was aight...

aiight... flow was aiight..that voice he was using.. kinda was pushin me away from listenin... same with second dude..the flow they chose for the beat was aigght... first dude didnt have enuff sylables by farrrrr.. second dude had enuff sylables.. but he slang and the way he says stuff lol dont realy fit rap...smoka u were best on track... flow was aight.. none of the flows stood out on the track.. the chorus was aiiight.... again second dude sounds kinda korny hehe.. but its all good.. song is decent... just work on developin a flow and mic presence..

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