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Breakdown of The Prophet's Verse
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Originally posted by The Prophet
A MAN WALKS INTO A "BAR" AND A WHOLE PAGE OF PUNCHES ERUPT...Ha! Nice intro
BATTLING ME'S LIKE SITTING NEXT TO THE REAPER...YOU'LL GET BEATEN UNTIL YOU'RE "CLOSE-TO-DEATH"Heard&read similar lines too much
DIREKT SUBMITTED HIS SELF PORTAIT...AND HE STILL CAN'T EVEN "POSE-A-THREAT"Nice punch on his name
MY FLOWS-ARE-WET, SO EVEN IF A MOD DELETES THEM AND CLOSE-THE-THREAD, THEY STILL GET OUT AND "SOAK-IN-HEADS"This one was OK
WHILE YOUR PROSE IS PLAGUED...TO ATTRACT NO-NAMES-AND-WACK-BITERSaight
YOU DISSED ME NOT KNOWING YOUR SPINE WAS FLAMMABLE...UNTIL THINGS SLOWLY-CHANGED-AND-"BACK-FIRED"Ha! Nice punch here
I GOT PROPANE, A MATCH, AND LIGHTER...READY TO START-SOME-SH*T, LIKE AN ARSONIST, JUST SHOW ME WHERE THE FORREST-ISThis was nice too and it went together perfectly..Ha!
KID YOU'RE THE ONE AT FAULT-IN-THIS, I'M AFULLY-SICK, AND THE ARIZONIA WILDFIRES IS WHAT ACCUSSING ME OF BITING RESULTED-INPretty good but wasn't flowin' too good
I FATHER KIDS...LIKE DIREKT WHO CLIMB-IN-BED-AND-LISTEN, FOR NOISES AND GET "UNDERCOVER" AND HIDE-LIKE-EDDIE-GRIFFIN, AND CRIES-IF-HIS-TEDDY'S-MISSINGHa! Ha! Nice punch to make the comp seem like a bitch
KID I KNOW YOUR LINES ARE ALREADY SCRIPTED...AND WE'RE NOT EVEN MAKING-A-MOVIEAight, but not effective
NONE THE LESS PROCEED TO "DROP YOUR BAR"...AND LIKE SHOWERING INMATES I'M TAKING-YOUR-BOOTYHa! This line cracked me up...
THE WAY I'M PRODUCING...AND "PERFECTING-THESE-CLASSIC-HITS", YOU'D THINK TED-WILLIAMS-WAS-BATTING-STILL, BUT DON'T WORRY...ONCE DECOMPOSITION TAKES PLACE YOUR "DEAD"-LYRICS-CAN-PASS-FOR-ILLThis was an OK bar
I'M NOT THROUGH DESTROYING YOU YET KID...
YOU DESERVE THIS BRUTAL BEATING I'M ABOUT TO GIVE YOU
I FEEL LIKE I CAN KEY ALL DAY...
THE 20 BAR MAX HAS NOW BEEN UPPED TO 40...
I GOT YOU SHORT OF BREATH...LIKE I TOOK ONE OF YOUR LUNGS-YOU-BREATHE-WITH
YOU'RE DUM-AND-SPEECHLESS, TRYING TO WONDER-SECRET...(HOW CAN I RIDE PROPHET'S D*CK HE HAS THE HUNGEST-P*NIS)  I thought the 1st line was played to death, but the 2nd one was real nice....
BOW TO ME I'M F*CKING-JESUS, EVERYTHING I COME UP-WITH'S-GENIOUS, IT'S LIKE EVERYBODY'S CARRYING SHOVELS THEY'VE ALL "DUG-MY-READINGS"Man this line was off the chain too..you got some nice punches
IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE THROWING UP GANG SIGNS I'VE SO BADLY PUNCHED-YOUR-TEETH-IN, YOUR GUMS-ARE-BLEEDING, YOU'RE PANICKING CAUSE SO MUCH BLOOD-IS-LEAKINGAight but not effective
I'VE KILLED SO MANY EMCEES THEY'VE MADE A "DUCKING-SEASON", WHERE EMCEES CAN RUN-FROM-BEATINGS, JUST TO MAKE MY BATTLES JUST-AND-EVENHa! Feelin' this shit...
PROPHET BITING IS UNBELEIVING...NEXT TIME YOU START IT WITH AN EMCEE JUST DON'T PICK THE ILLEST ONE-TO-BEEF-WITHNice closin', statin' the personal beef..
I'M DONE-DEFEATING...
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Breakdown of Direkt's Verse
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Originally posted by Direkt-Threat
Blah, Quick 30, Peace.
Increasing My Chances Of Winning, But Direkt Settles For More-Aight line....I get it
Because Your Methaphores Better Be Raw To Battle These Jaws-!Another aight line...
Im Advanced In Technology, Heard This Fag Wanted Alot Of Me-
But Watching His Martial Status Rise And Fall Like The Economy-!This bar pretty good
I'll Steak Out;Your An Egg In An Shell, You'll Never Break Out-
Prophet Is Like Money In A Wallet, He's Too Easy To Take Out-!1st line was aight....2nd was on point and good
I'll Throw His Soul In a Frying Pan And Watch His Heart Scramble-
Start To Vandal; Like A 4 Year Old In A Truck, Im Hard To Handle-!Aight bar......
Deck&Split Him Like A Pack Of Cards;See! He Can't Spar With Me-
Everyone On R.B Is Tired of Hearin Prophet Like Ja Rule And Ashanti-!Ha! Liked that first line and 2nd...2nd wasn't too hard but it was effective
Twist Your Limbs;Even Your Mans Will Shout, He'll Scram No Doubt-
Lands A Drought;Walks Pants-less and Still He Doesn't Stand Out-!HA! Yeah, this was a nice bar too.
How Do You Let Someone Bitch You With The Same Name?-
InVein; Playing Lame Games, This Kid Can't Withstand Pain-!Ha! That first line was a nice personal and the 2nd was cool too...
Please Don't Be Blamming Direkt Threat For Changing Your Sex-
He Tries Using Red In His Lead Thinking It'll Flame Up His Text- !Ha! Ha! This was a very nice line and stated a fact pretty much
40 Bars...Closing Your Eyes Racing;Did You Run Out of Lines?-
People Bounce At Rhymes...You Funny? Your Fun Has Just Died-!Dug the first line and the 2nd was straight
Verse Is Like Newspaper Titles;Seems Like All Your Lines Are Recycled-
By Far Im A Deciple...The only Time He'll Beat Me Is Jesus' Arrival-!This bar was nice and the flip on that Jesus line is very nice too
On My Track, I Still Wouldn't Rep You, Look Again Befor You Step To-
Reachable Distance; Prophets Feelings Are Never Hard To Get To-!Ha! I get this one....I've researched this beef a bit..
Strips While Jacking;Mummy-fing Your Self Isn't Considered Rapping-
Bleeding;I'll Slip You A Napkin, Kids Words Are Mixed Up Like Pig Latin-!Nice flow with that one and nice punch
Take It All The Way, Try Not To Slack P;Fuck Flesh, I Attack Meat-
Crack Me? Put Foil On Your Words, It Still Wouldn't Attract Heat-!Ha! The foil line was nice
Listen Ho! Your Scripts Have No Flow;It's Known He's Splitting Slow-
Spitting Close? Your Punchlines Are Older Then Ali Hitting Ropes-!Nice Ali punch
You Think Im Wack...End Conversation, Don't Even Start That-
This Kid Doesn't Bounce Back Like Basketballs That Are Flat-!I was diggin' this punch... It was nice
Your God's Prophet Right? Here's Some Advice; Pray For Your Life-
Battling Direkt Again? Give You Two Brains So You Can Think Twice-!Pretty effective bar even though the think twice line is played....
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Punches- Prophecy
Metaphors- Direkt
Flow- Direkt
Content- tie
Humor- Prophecy
Overall- Direkt
I thought Proph had it but Direkt somehow edged this out....with the better overall...Nice battle though...It took long enough to explain the vote too....
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