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From: ☆•°•☆яαρvεяεѕε☆•°•☆ |
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IP:
Voted For: genocide
Break Down For Dopeman:
bitch! only thing ya destined for is defeat.....
before ya check in, ya pulse is racin an you cant feel your heartbeat...
^^Opener Nah Not Feelin It .. And The Lines Were'nt Even Close To Matching Up ... That's One Thing I Don't Like.. A Run On... While Keying... 2/10
now ya broke, cause you used your cents for all those wishes.....
its not all bad, u can be my bitch n i'll pay you a buck for washin my dishes...
^^ Kinda Fucked Up ... Closer ' ..! And Still You Have Run On's
Vocabulary - Wasn't All There.. (Improve)
Wordplay - You Had Some.. Was Aight.. (Could Improve)
Multies - The Ones You Had Were Kind Of Weak ...
Opener - Weak
Closer - Weak
Keystyle - Was Aiight .. But Them Stretched Lines Through You Off A Bit.. Because I Wasn't Feeling 'Em..
Over All : You Could Work On Some Of The Categories.. I Gave You ...!! But Decent......
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Breakdown For Genocide:
yo I wish I was god and I could "heal your spits"
but even if my hand was up your ass I couldn't "feel your shit"
^^Alright Opener... Was Better Then The Other Catt's ...
your style is weak you freak you must be a "stoner"
you cherish my rhymes so much when you read them you get a "boner"
I'd rather you not spit back your shit rap that lacks it's own "tolerence"
^And For As Your Closer Goes... I Have Nothing To Say I Think It Speaks For Itself...!! It Was Beyond... Wack' .. I Mean You Could Improve On Almost Every Category.. '!!
This Battle Was... Aight But Ya'll Catt's... Re-ad-vise Or Some Shit.. lol For Real .. *Props* To Both Though...
-Battle Was Pretty Close...!!! If Dopeman Could Have Shortened Up His Stretched Out Lines.. I Would Of Gave Him The Vote....!! But I Wasnt Really Feeling His Shit ... It Was Way Too Long... And He Didn't Keep Me Intrested Through Out His Flow.. So ...
Sorry I Had To Go With Genocide..... On This One..!!!
-Vote Genocide
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