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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP:
Voted For: Banks
imma give this to eye:
lethal lunatic: ya structure was good. flow was umm ok. ya had some pretty weak attempts at punches. also when i started reading the G-G-G-G line, i thought u might of finished it off well. but again a weak attempt at a personal.
I think you need to work on ya wordplay n metas too. i dunno if you were tryna do sumfin with tha chokehold line. it could of bin wprded better to make a successful meta. no hate.
Eyedentikal: ok nice structure, almost perfect. nice punches. you had alot of metas here too. really nice ones:-
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^nice metas...
links were usefull too. although i would try to cut them out in battles. 1 or 2 maybe but don't go over the top. Just a thought. but its your verse.
Ok imma giving this to eye for harder punches and better usage of metas.
Vote: eye
Return tha favour please.
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