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Old 10-28-04, 03:35 PM   #28
Dirty Nigga
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metas taken dimensions outta ya strict x- n y-axis
ya record low rated like porn films payin' an actress
^^^
thats dope as hell, nice wordplay n punch...


cast de-voting cuz ya critiques are viewed with laughs
ya rib cage collapsed, pass plates 'til ya vocab run laps
^^^
dope as hell again, last line was pure ''fiya''

wasnt feel the hook tho, that pidgeon shit thing, i thought that was a lil lame...
hook could have been better
nice wordplay in the verses, an the brdige was okay...maybe a lil pointless to be honest, but overall not a bad drop
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