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Voted For: D-Thug
Murda
U look shook grabbin ur rhyme book to find a decent hook,
But u left grilled like burnt out cooks cryin like the victims of crooks
^^^SHows how the rest of the verse will go. crazy funyn at aprts, lines were a bit long and punches were a bit off at times, but overall very good. DNA closer was good. 7/10
lem'me talk to who's in charge da shit u typed gotta be ghost
cus you basically was a waste of 462 posts
^^Only good part was when it was over. Whack and should not be battlin Gangstarshit. Elevate and you'll be alright. punches were mdeiocre at best. 4.10
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