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Old 10-28-04, 06:43 PM   #8
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Voted For: Paradox

First of all i would like to say BK brawla cheated he spat about 10 lines . . .


Break down

you winnin? you didnt refuse but you dont have an excuse...
better chance in court filing a suit against me for verbal abuse..
your sitten there stunned, like my boy Chris Reeves...
thinking you can stand up, seems no one believes...
you had a dream, thinking to yourself that "you can beat'em"...
well certainly Martin Luthor King didnt "give you that freedom"...

Verbal abuse not hard hitting punch it was decent.
Chris Reeves.. aha that punch was better.
And the matin lutho king lien was str8 illl..



Vs

like an fake stampede u aint stomping me,like ya rhymes da only thing u stomping is in turd (ya rhymes are shit)
ya punches arnet tha hardest nor da greatest u should save dem wack rhymes for blurps..............................(1)
my rhymes are da flowest and tha windest exposing them panties under ya pink skirt (da wind lefting up his skirt)
my punches got da nigga feelings hurt but somtimes u gots to take drastic-measurez exert (him) (taking advantage of disability peep'z)..............(2)
iam gonna leave dis last-line with holes da size of pimples,break ya face than car dentures,

These lines were stretched lacked flow.. 0 punchlines and he mis spelt alot of his words and u explained ya verse like the wack herb u are. u said stomping a TURD? what is a TURD makes no sense.. WACK rhyme for blurps sorry that was str8 wack and did not even hit.


Paradox had better flow, vocab & he made sense.. also his punchlines conntected will better

V/ Paradox.
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