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Old 10-28-04, 08:27 PM   #20
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Voted For: GKillaz05

You Beatin me? Nigga Please, Let's get Back to reality...
Have you runnin from Beef like you changed Nationalities...

hot ass opener!!!...

Spittin' Automatics, Dump Gkillaz Body in the Attic...
Electrifiying Lines'll Shock You, Hair stuck up from static..

ehh...no real punch

20 Lines in 30 minutes, If anything he spit is sick,
......................................then it's pre-written...
In The Herb Column, your takin up the whole space
..............................like fat bitches sitten...

stretched lines here... flow was off

His Dream, Was to be a successful rapper, That didn't work..
The Next Night, i saw him on the, gay men network..

blah... filler line

These Nines'll Pop ya Eardrums, But really thats a benifit..
Now You Can't hear the crowd boo, give me credit bitch..
Like Stick Keyboards, each battle, dude talks about the same thing,
How He's a suberbian white man iced-out in bling bling..

pointless... let's get some real punches and personals in here

But thats all the better reason for me to stick you up..
So You can Kiss "ya ass so long" like pick-up trucks..

ok ... coulda been worded better

Your road to victory, What road to victory all i see is a cliff..
Leave This Kid Rolled Up like Jamaicans and Spliffs..

ehhh.. not strong enough... but ok

thirty minutes who would of thought that excuse was bought..
he obvi been writin this verse for the past 2 years,
.........................atleast that's what i thought..

stretched... already brought up the 30 minute thing before...

He's been writin this verse for 3 years and still about to lose..
Lasers all over this Bitch, Like Ugly Women and Tattoos
It's Over Nigga, I freestyled this whole thing and imma still win..
The Great Gkillaz was just a myth Like Aliens and Dragons

kinda forced that last bar but the fat lady / tattoos line was funny shyt... overall 6.9/10



Put da gat to ya dome and pull da trigga in a minute...
Leave you wit a hole so BIG - Notorious could jump in it...

funny shyt.... good opener

You already got merked dawg dats why your crews heaven...
Your like a courner store... records soon gun be 7/11...

woulda been a dope line if it was worded better

First time we clashed...we both battled like some titans...
After that battle was done, to call me out left ya frightened...
Now you think you got SKILLS and a new set of BALLS...
But they stink must have picked em up in a washroom stall...

lmao... that's some funny shyt... small personal thrown in about last battle

Beggin me to join your crew - NO... Your-Crews-Lame...
Boo's came so you had to run and get yourself a new name...

nice!!! personal with a punch

Kontroverzey battlin vs me Ima leave ya in a hearse B...
Smokin' this herb like to many times leavin me thirsty...

boooo at this line

Tryna be a "G" but even your keyboard dont got the letter...
Change ya name 300 times but ya still wont get any better...

already used the name change line...

Used to be from NYC - Now your only weapons on X-Box...
Merkin' you faster then the yanks got by the red socks...
See your like Disney... the way your raps are G-Rated...
Seen ya pic now think you and Mike Jackson are related...

seems filler

Got somethin up ya ass?.. lines stretched out like a thong...
www.whackbattlers.com is where this punk ass kid belongs...

closer shoulda ended stronger but it was ok

overall 7.4/10

this was a pretty close battle considering... both had moments where they shined but Kon stumbled just a bit more than G did... watch the line stretching... try not to repeat the same ideas throughout the battle... ya both did it at least once... but yeah... good battle and keep doing y'all thang

V/GKilla
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