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Old 10-28-04, 10:21 PM   #12
Lil-Youngstah
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damn dawg it was too damn basic, needed to step it up, ya mostly messed up in da 3 first lines they was plain wack, everybody raps that kind of stuff ya need to rap about something dat feels comfortable with u aight
keep at it though
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