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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Drastic-dont use the /'s...its noobish, Anyways...instead of having a lot of little multis...try to expand...but its good that your using them, nice punches at times, a few week ones though...your structure was off and that messed wit your flow, but an overall decent drop
Two-Your structure and flow was better than Drastic, but thats about it....tried to play his name twice, weak...gun talk is over played, and no punches....you need to elevate son
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