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Old 10-28-04, 11:00 PM   #13
Parallel
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Voted For: Triple_N

Ill-Grammatix:
k man your shit was a very creative verse but it wasent to much full of emotion i gotta give this to a vet but you were good nice vocab and diggnity n shit...good topic who ever chose it to...your verse had good emption but not as good as triples you were hot n shit close battle.....8.7/10

Triple_N:
k you had some good stucture and some good flow as did gram..but triple you had soem tight emotion in that shit but i dont see you as a topical lol...your better with punches but nun the less you had some dope shit you didnt have the vocabulary but you had the emotion nice shit dawg close battle:.....8.9/10

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