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(X) CeED
KWELL, get this b**** dwell, rebelled,the (X) cast a spell while i VANISH you by the count of 10//
Im an M.C. Master of Ceremonies,Mic of Control//
Get the b**** to kill himself like MARYLIN MUNROE//
KWELL, YOU LACK THE FLOW,i'll POP your PROBE//
^^^good shit had some multi's in there good vocab kid wordplay was that? (X)=10?? Marylin Munroe line was cool rated 7/10
The Kids scared hes already a NERVOUS WRECK//
The kats record is crazed ill have t osnap his NECK//
I like a really bad dream get this kat afraid' like hes had LEPRESY//
The kid is scared cuz his rhymes have left him wit' a VISECTOMY//
The thing(him) is terrifed thinkn' hell b killed by another attack of Histimene//
The kids name not KWELL, hes a girl wit' a name like "MELANIE"//
Flow came up good structure more Multi's so and so againe ya Vocabulary was there good shit but one thing drop tha "//" played kid other then that good flow 5/10
KWELL
I dont give a fuck what your name is, son u aint exceedin me
u think u the Don? well lez see how u sound after u add your Key
jackass--when it comes to dope lines, ya known ta' bring none
you're so dumb u'd,
...stack up couches n shit, jus to show peeps ya sofa kingdom
how u gon diss my lines kid, it's almost like u gotta rhyme glitch
look, i'ma deafen u, cuz thats the only way u gittin signed bitch
jus face it--u aint admired 'round here, so jus stop n quit
u like a bird, aint nobody wanna be around when u droppin shit
this herb made a trip down memory lane n got his ass lost
so i'ma drop this bum, n i aint talkin bout laughin my ass off
ya weak punches cant harm me, u'll be fucked up wit jabs
n u aint elevated--it's jus that ya abused pussy is up fo' grabs
fuckin fag, out the rap game is where i'm sendin you wheelin'
cuz marsupials are the only things hiphoppin in New Zealand
why the fuck haven't u fallen off yet--even tho u soft?
i guess i gotta pretend i'm as wack as u, jus to throw u off
^^^basic rhymes kid alot of bitch this bitch that come on now structure was cool but my vote was based on vocabulary you got a 6/10 on ya flow no hate
big ups both yall
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