Banned: Permanent
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IP:
Voted For: Triple_N
Emotion... Both had really good emotion in the pieces and really good out looks on the piece.... but im going to have to give this to triple beuasue his piece was alot more emotional and was really good...
Imagery... I would have to give this slightly to Triple just for the fact taht when i was reading his verse i was really drawn into it and felt like i was there... really good piece man...
Flow... i would have to say that this is a tie due to the fact both had different parts of the flow...
Structure... This aswell im going to have to give to triple beacuse with Ill's centered wasnt really working for him with his structure and i usually really enjoy centered pieces but it just wasnt working this time...
Rhyme Scheem... Again this is a tie beacuse both you had your shit rhyming and i really dont like doing that because in topicals i like it alot better when it is freeverse... but whatevers clever
v/triple n 3/5
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