Voted For: Premanition

Close battle......

Imagery...prem's imagery was much more thorough in this one, it wasn't great and neither was oreo's but prem's was btetter developed an was easier to follow in my opinion.

Flow....The flow from both was tight...so I'd say this was a tie...neither one really edged the other in this category.

Structure...has to go to prem...his verse fit neatly to his post soem of oreo's lines are clearly stretched and lose the slashes oreo you don't need them an it takes away from your verse

Emotion.....Prem again...his was worded better and he used his vocab to really express the emotion of this piece...oreo stayed a lil too basic an repetitive with his an it took away from the emotion of his spit.

Story....Prem again is was just more original and better told....oreo went off on some jail shit...really played concept in topicals....where as prem took the topic an ran wit it in his own unique way...nice job on that

Overall...I gotta give this to prem for jus a betetr verse on most levels...he took 4 out of 5 of the categories an got my vote.....much respect to both plz return the favor

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