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Old 10-29-04, 02:16 PM   #20
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Voted For: Paradox

punches: paradox.....opener was cocky...i lyke that

flow: paradox....BK's verse was stretched...you coulda added multis to keep it from being stretched

open: paradox..."turd and blurps" dont rhyme...paradox hit em short simple an sweet.

close: paradox...they were both lacking, but BK's closing statements made no fucking sense...you remedial?

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both verses coulda been A LOT better....Bk, if you hada put more effort in it(werdplay, better constructed punches, creativety) you woulda prolly got this one....ya'll both need to up ya skillz and keep battlin
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