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Old 10-29-04, 03:37 PM   #6
Terse.
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Voted For: Carnage

aight,
Lil Bitz...u had a nice attempt, i can tell you're a beginner...but u need to elevate...there was nothin in your verse that stood out as bein real good...the punches were all weak n played, u gotta be more creative wit those...n half the time it was like u were jus doin random freestylin cuz u werent really dissin him.........Carnage, not a bad verse...again, i didnt really see anythin special, but u at least made okay attempts at punches...anyways,

V/ Carnage, for better overall verse n for hittin his opponent every time...no hate, jus honest feedback...