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Old 10-29-04, 04:31 PM   #53
streetryda
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Vote:In-vision

aight my vote goes to in cuz his piece was more complex it was deep it had a really unexpected twist which made it hotter than it was..it flowed nicely..good use of multi's....i liked it..it as real....sorta...and the use of you being peer pressure in itself was awesome real good thinkin on htat one

hope-ok u had a really good verse too....i felt the emotion more in your verse....had good flow in it....a lil predictable at points like towards the end i kinda saw the crash with your "friend" coming so that kinda lost you the win....very deep....you complexity lacked a lil too..but it was a real nice piece....

i liked the topic a lot for this topical....it was really deep and emotional too i felt this one...keep it real pplz...
peace~1

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battle in my sig..peace~1
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