Voted For: Carnage

carnage got this battle

carnage-okay good punches were good for a newb.but as expected from them rhyme was basic and so was wordplay but better than lil bitz's....personals were good and flow was okay work on that some...structure was off work on that too same with wordplay but good drop for a newb 7/10

lil-okay you had a very very very basic drop rhyme scheme was very simple...punches were real weak...you misspelled shovel purposely to rhyme it with level...no personals.....flow was off...structure was horrible..and try not to self glorify it takes from it sometimes unless you incorperate it right....but elevate baaadddly...work on structure/punches/vocab/wordplay/and personals

you both need to elevate

v/carnage

return the vote..battle in my sig...honest explained votes only....
graci
Peace~1

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