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once again, good shit here demik.. ..don't know why this is slept on, but this was very good.. ..opener was koo, i liked tha second line.. ..
"His High Majesty Even Thought That He Could Breathe In Space..
A Lifetime Of Over Sustenance, Made That Hard On This Place..
More Of A Remissness Than A Place, Let Tha Turth Be Told..
His Authority Over A Beating Metropolis Was Always Gonna Fold..
Like A Slender Pillow, But His Sentiment Seemed Enigmatic..
Tha Creation Of A Self Destructing Device, He'd Be Tha Plastic.."
^^ very nice.. ..feelin this part tha most, especially tha bolded lines.. ..
"With Unexcited Inhabitents Who This King Is Scared To Face..
His Perfection Was Cataclysmic, Tha Catalyst Of Fallacy.."
^^ nice.. ..
"With Unexcited Inhabitents Who This King Is Scared To Face..
His Perfection Was Cataclysmic, Tha Catalyst Of Fallacy.."
^^ liked this part as well, overall this was ill.. ..i like your style and creativity, keep it up
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