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Old 10-29-04, 07:58 PM   #8
Terse.
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aight,
Soc, ya verse was aight...punch-wise, u were sorta half n half throughout, cuz some lines were good but others jus seemed like they were filler...but u at least had some consistency...Troop, i liked ya verse too...u mos def had good vocab throughout, but a lot of your punches seemed a lil indirect...to me it almost seemed like u were jus showin off ya vocab...but anyways,

V/ Socrates, for more consistency...