1. Kill the yo yo shit an check it.
2. Turn your vocal's up.
3. Good Flow. on a Blah very generic beat.
4. Try not to make ur hook sound like ur verse's. sing a lil.

It wasn't bad, All I can say is it does get a lil annoyin the way u Flow.
The in an out stuff.....its jus a lil....a tad....annoyin.
I'd like to see you stay "in" all the time.

Nice. -1