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Old 10-30-04, 01:49 AM   #22
Triple_N
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Kwell...you had alot of wordplay if you just had some more origianl concepts you woulda took this but the playedness of your verse is what killed u becuz u were much more complex than he was...with fantastic wordplay but just played shit...period lines are like a mortal sin....your closer was ncie but the rest was played but clever.
Give you a...........7/10

Kontro....you got this by the skin of your teeth with just more originality, not very complex an the stop kwell thing was wack but u had clever persoanls, and nice flow...so I gave to just on that but if kwell had used the same owrdplay on more original concepts he woulda murked u easy...but u got it just by being original no other reason really.

Give ya a........7.2/10

Vote: Kontro
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