this was preety good, 1st verse was better then the 2ed decent word-play and all flow was decent and all the hook wasnt bad preety good try elevating u'r idea on paper like get more creative witht he topic u in try thinking the un-thinkable or something like that, u know what i mean i cant really explain it well but get more open mind'ed and it will come out natrually....

7.2/10


can u drop some feed on my freestyle befor work....

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