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Old 10-30-04, 11:18 AM   #15
Terse.
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Voted For: Triple_N

good battle right here...real close...
Auto, ya verse was straight...the structure was on point so the it had a nice flow to it...punches were coo, the concepts behind them were good, but they it seemed like they coulda hit harder...but i didnt like your opener/closer cuz they were both self-glorification...

Triple, i liked ya verse too...structure was decent, but the lines were a lil stretched so the flow was hurtin a bit...but your punches were good...i was lmao @ some of them like the 'hose' line...some punches werent entirely original, but they had a different twist to 'em like the shakira line...which was coo i guess...overall, u had better consistency cuz u hit Auto in everyline...anyways,

V/ Triple N, for more consistency...