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Old 07-24-02, 01:28 AM   #4
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RB's Grandpa.!
 
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Tru: ~Yo fuck dat, you know he eat diss pu-tang on a daily basis, yea he taste it, all I gotta do is ask him when he good n wasted....

...OH SHIT^ LOL

Tru: ~uhhh... I dont think you ready to meet him yet...
Gee: Well I'm ready and willing... if he can make dis coochie wet/

...GOOD Story-Line Theme, i kinda saw where it was going from here
...GOOD Flow with the follow up BaBy


Tru: ~stupid azz bitch I was talkin about yo dad.....shit...
Gee: Girl you nasty...he'll give u crabs on your clit!!
Tru: ~WTF yo daddy got crabs and you aint gonna tell me!!!??
Gee: I didn't know u was gonna be fuckin' him!! So quit your yelling.../
Tru: ~Well it dont matta cuzz I still got my boo...
Gee: Um..wait a minute Tru..I got sumthing to tell you


...woulda made a better ending with this and a lil more





*Over-All this shit was crazy, nothing to deep but still creative as fuck, with good storyline theme and 2 ILL ass LADYS reppin there ryhme skills and having fun at the same time...

-MUCH PROPS
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