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Old 10-30-04, 09:15 PM   #10
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Voted For: Ice Pick

this was an ok battle...

but ice came way harder i thought hitting bar after bar...
3rd shift fuck He's Shook, Sweating Me,, Relax, He Might Start Bleeding From His Hands-And-His-Feet
This Man's-is-Weak,,Ice rips his Arms out his Sockets,, Just to start "Expanding-his-Reach
nice opener straight at him....

i'll White those Wordz out..don't worry ya' SECRET is Safe-wit-us
i DISLIKE YO' DIGESTIVE ORGANS..Translation.. i Hate-ya-GUTZ
cool flip on the 2ed line again straight at him raw...

Ya Lines,,, Like HAND ME DOWNS,,, Somebody has Used it Before kid
I cuaght and avoided the punch and tackle like i was peter warrick
Your lyrics are soft, and what adds to that is that they're published in paper-back
Can't catch Ice when his rocket-boosts, by the way, Dr.-Suess wants his papers-back
ha nice ending good punch again raw N straight at him good drop... 9.0

3ed u was aight but u aint come straight at him raw N flow was good vocab was decent but wasnt creative enough with it N thought need it to come harder...

you manifest a bitchmade beantown pussy no more no less
my flow castrates ya so u apply tampons to stop the bleedin in excess
that was nice u came at him raw...

ill make ya kids bastards to be, watch me murder this man
ya structures' outgrownin ya words like a midget wit shaq's pituatary gland
that was preety decent but could of came harder...

somebody should confinskate ya mic an hand u a dick
caz ya rhymes is IMPOTENT cant produce punches that actually hit...
i aint think this was a good ending but ok but not suited for a ending sorry but decent verse....

7.3

vote ice