dannnnnnnggggggggg this was a really good piece for you being away for some time...flowed beautifuly.....multis off the hook.....vocab was great...to me it didnt seem to fall off near the end like the others said cuz they just didnt understand the meanin of your perspective of words in it........keep it up beautiful....post some feedback on my first poem in my sig......graci
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