Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Two_Bit:
k your stucture was good and it flowed but it didnt have any punches didnt work good dawg you need some punches to win...so try and but you ahd some pretty witty metas that was koo...try working on punches ask someone to elevate you or soemthing...

DrasticMeasurez:
nice verse to steched tho but it flowed i guess bad stucture but alright i guess...dope punches hit hard damn...jk...good vocabulary and some pretty hard hitting witty metaphores...but try working on stucture it will make you flow better...

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