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Old 10-31-04, 02:32 AM   #12
streetryda
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Voted For: illuson

aight my vote barely goes to illusion
here's why

thousand-fuck this bitch......i'll eat up this pussy like a apple
This kid is useful...I can use you as a bad example
^^eh alright opener..okay punch coulda hit harder
fuck it...i'll abuse this bitch like he is fucking used
If you sold winning streaks...no one would ever lose
^^weak punch didnt hit
I'll beat this kid with ease...but it don't really matter
You pack less punch than a retard throwing feathers
^^self glorify and it didnt realy rhyme to well weak punch
this kid's fucked...on the arena there'd be no friendship
your punches less useful than a parachute on a spaceship
^^kinda funny punch okay closer best punch of all
over all 4/10 you came weak with punches no personals and they only thing good was structure flow was okay

illusion-when im done with u ull be in the hospital
ure rhymes are old like a dinsour fossil
^^weak opener punch missed
but ull be set when u get ure realse
hey since ure broke rent the space between ure teeth
^^haha funny punch woulda been easier to understand if ya added a comma and didnt have ure as ur
u really must be trippin
if this bitch belives hes spittin
^^okay punch not too good coulda been harder
u say on the grind u covinced u can rhyme?U?
ill out rhyme u then out grind u
^^eh weak closer rhymed u with you coulda been better
overall 5/10

punches=ill
flow=tho
structure=tho
vocab=ill
worplay=ill
personals=neither

v/illusion

peace~1
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