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Old 10-31-04, 02:44 AM   #15
streetryda
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Voted For: Thousand Miles

got my vote

epic-ok first off epic wrote wayy over the limit so you should automaticly lose for that....you had a horrible structure....flow was aiight not too good...punched were weak and just fell off i didnt like your verse to much...vocab was okay not too good....no multi's personals lacked horribly

work on your punches make em more complex...even out your lines to fix your structure......make your personals hit harder...put multi's in to increase flow....and get better vocab
overall 5/10


tho-okay you had humerous punches.....better vocab..you punches seemed to hit harder.....but you didnt have any personals....structure was better....vocab was better...you had a more complex verse i liked it it flowed good and you had a few multi's..good drop man

over all 6/10


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