Voted For: BkBrawla

streetryda:
hmm good stucture and it flowed but that was weak dawg...weak punches and wordplay...try working on that shit...and you'll be dope vocabulary you were pretty weak with that but o well elevate in time...

BKBrawler:
dayum bad stucture but it flowed good vocabulary...dope ass punches liek dayum where that coem from naw jk...good wordplay at some spots...nice verse is all i gotta say...keep workin that shit but try fix your stucuture...

sry for my spelling im tierd

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