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I just don't give a fuck!
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Voted For: Thousand Miles
Thousand got this.
illusion: first of all ya structure wasn't too great. punches were weak. U had some metas, weak, but still u had some. Try and work on ya structure and add some more wittier lines with wordplay and improved metas. elevate.
Thousand Miles: Nice verse. structure was neatly structured. had some nice metas. I liked the meta in ya first bar. punches were alright. i think u got this battle with better structure and punches.
vote: Thousand Miles
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