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Old 10-31-04, 10:33 AM   #11
Ca'lam
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i listened..

multis were cool.. your delivery really dampers it and emotion dampers it.. the lyrics were there.. but you gotta be clear and have somethin uniwue to it.. either the effects u put on it or something.. but the track was lacking that warmth and that oomph to make it urs, feel me ? cause lyrics arent enuff.. for audio u need at least decent on everything in order for people to feel it... if u just up your emotion alot, and ya delivery and make ya style yours.. u'll be solid.. -1
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