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Old 10-31-04, 12:10 PM   #13
Meziaa.
New to RV
 
Posts: 64
From: Bean town.
IP:

Yea..

All the yo and uh shit is done with..
Your hook is aight...
Your presence is aight, ya flow is annoying to me for some reason..
but that's just me, you know..
This beat, defintely ain't feeling it...
And ya emotion is aight..
Lyrics is straight, quality good...

I say work on ya flow and emotion..
And ya voice also...
that "aaa" "flaaa" "gaaa" shit needs to get lost..
Do you though, keep working at it.
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