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this was nice, feelin it mos def.. ..
"Fine women and weed with the sun against ya chest;
i must confess, put me to rest if this is life at it's best;"
^^ opener had a nice vibe to it, got me interested.. ..good images.. ..
"revolved around gettin pissed and puttin out a diss;
& life is like a sweet kiss diffrent from slitting wrists;
in this generation, rhyming puts my soul to ease;
& smokin leaves with a breeze and tricks up ya sleeve;
call me insane but, i consider it more as a pet peave;
to leave as the best and still making people believe;
a hobby for all strugglers in the world to take up;
maybe duck a battle and still not seem to give a fuck;
ask for easy favors, like requests from a dirty slut;
bust a nut and leave the girls mind all corrupt;"
^^ an example of how good tha flow was.. ..
"my face red and blue and skin white, america is true;
sittin around in life with nothin to do;
until you called up them two girls ya screwed;
life? i could really tell ya, so get my face;
and my race and see threw my eyes in another place;"
^^ liked tha endin, my favorite part as well.. ..keep spittin
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