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Voted For: ReQuiem
Golden shellz-You got skills, you just waste em by basing your whole drop on gunplay....get original kid, it was a nice rap with a good structure n flow...but the overplayed concept killed ya
ReQuiem-structure was a little off..but it didnt effect the flow to bad..noticed one personal...gay talk is overplayed...but you didnt base your whole rhyme scheme on it like Golden with gunplay...
V/Requiem
Reason:More original
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