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Old 10-31-04, 06:58 PM   #12
Parallel
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Voted For: Justify

RapGog:
forced lines almost...alright stucture...coulda been better...bad punches very bad punches could been better there wordplay...none at all...this aint a hate vote eathe ri dont even know you so...

Justify:
not bad verse...stucure pretty good not bad verse realy...alright punches coulda been better...but i think you could elevate pretty damn fast...no doubt lol...some good vocabulary in there flowed well good verse you get my vote

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