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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
illusion-before you do any more battles...elevate...a lot...thanks...everything of yours was basic....punches didnt hit...no personals or wordplay...liek i said...elevate
JR Freeze-dont use those //'s we'll know where your line ends....your structure was off...it threw off your flow a little bit...but lets see/...a lot of wordplay....no personals...decent punches and an average vocab...mediocre drop...but it gets you the win
V/JR Freeze
Reason:Better wordplay vocab and punches
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