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Old 10-31-04, 08:34 PM   #12
Triple_N
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666

Wicked.....your flow was cool but centering your verse didn't cover up how stretched your lines were an centering is wack in battles it works best in topicals in battles its wack....your punches were fair some were played but some hit good...personals were not reallyy visible u tried but nah....metas were decent nothing special...need wordplay but it was somewhat creative oif a verse

String...your verse was weak...flow was bad, strucutre was bad, all your concepts were played and u ddin't word them properly to at least get some props for having a played punch u just had aplayed line cuz they weren't punchhes no personals....and your vocab was real basic....metas didn't exist, u need to elevate

Punches: Wick
Persoanals: tie
Flow: wick
Struc: Wick
Metas: wick
Worplay: Tie(none from neither)
Creativity: tie(none from neither)
Vote: Wick
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