im not here to take an "L", im past high...
so imma elevate over you like the last guy
Not a great punch-- wordplay is simple enough to understand, but a little too simple.
every opponent thats ever been holding
is laid up in recovery swollen
nice flow- This is like an audio verse so far, need harder punches tho.
....im kung fu....
some come kick lyrics if thats what you gone do
im on you, like a swarm of bees
and every sting is a vote for me.
mm... not very good, but I see where your going.. kinda basic though
you fall like pentacostals in spirit
soul clapped??? i dont wanna hear it..
lol I think this is kinda funny, you dont say much but effective to me.
and your nearing the end of your zen
im taking your peace... like 50cent and JA...
.......ya nah-mean.....
This has to be spit to really come across, not a great bar for text battle..
your mike hawk and that boils down to nothing really
your flows are like a cry for help, screaming something kill me
kinda funny, wordplay needs some elevation though
and im here to be that for ya like a good samartian
the hoods comparison to a general in Nam
so its clear who you battling is droppin bombs...
bar is strange structure wise, just elevate your verses complexity-- more complex punches- flow is less important here.
i script my lines in napalm... i dont need to punch ya
my flows enough to disfigure and dunce ya
kinda weak rhyme here... Just concentrate on what I said before.. stay up....

Flow was ass, just like you. . .what can you say
All I can say is dog. .you are gay
comeon-- this is beyond pitiful.. no effort at all.
Hey. . .your punches are played and late
your from the rotten apple reminds me of ur face
weak punch- again no effort at all... ur opponent at least tried.
somebody save em, give em a hymn
yung buck, still watch invader zim
crappy flow even, just not anything- I dont know what kids votin are smokin other than penis, but I vote Tito all day.

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