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Old 10-31-04, 10:59 PM   #5
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your verse all fucked up...believe me this matters
He'll go far......and the sooner he start the better
um don't worry kid I know you honest like farmers
U continue to show promises............................
........keeping unbroken record of broken promises
kid's screwed.......especially with a verse so wack
I don't need to call you a quitter.......................
.........he's screwed up every verse that he's had!
kid's froze up on his own name........what a shame
his freezing............even gave failure a bad name!
fuck this......even ice cube's will fucking froze you
in the rain......you're as useful as a box of tissues!