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Old 11-01-04, 01:53 AM   #9
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Voted For: Kwell

Grase... ya whole shyt was sloppy, dawg... no hate,just truth... no punches were thrown in ya verse... everything was chopped up and nothing led to to the next line... work on y astructure and ya disses... punchlines were non-existant... seriously need elevation here


Kwell... you killed this dude with ya verse... that us line was cool as shyt and i liked the play on his name... GAS...see how for you travel... hot shit son... structure was good... punches connected... personals woulda improved it but ya punches stung him well enough... good shyt yo
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