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Old 11-01-04, 05:01 AM   #8
Terumoto
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Mike:
Ya had some daaamn nice punches in there.. word to some of the wordplay.. nice opener n closer... but i wasnt feelin that structure... hard to read and pick up the flow.. a couple of lines seemed a little stretched... and some punches werent hittin as hard as the other ones..
. but it was a pretty nice verse... good work..
id give it like............. 7.5/10

Triple:
maddd punches... I was feelin ya wordplay, metas and personals... came really nice... hittin hard.... flow was good.. structure was pretty neat.. ..... word...
id give yours like..... uhh.. 8/10



good battle.
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