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Originally posted by DirtBoy69
strong emotion to this peice but the flow could be upped in spots it's a little weak nice use volcab too. you got the emotion just need to up other things
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come on dawg, if you read this, i didn't want any structure with this, i wrote this outta pure thought, flow or none, i didn't give a shit, besides, poetry ain't about flow, its about feelings... so
thanks to all those who replied, much respect
peace