View Single Post
Old 11-01-04, 03:14 PM   #40
FlowIntelligent.
The Epitome Of Greatness
 
FlowIntelligent.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 4,868
From: NY ... Born And Raised
IP:

Voted For: SPuL

banks:

your verse was decent but it was too basic your first 2 or 3 bars were extremely wack and werent needed... they killed your verse you had a couple witty punches and personals and the cher and prince mating bar was dope as fuck probably the best bar in this battle.. but you came to basic.

spul:

dont get me wrong youre a hoecake, but your verse was more consistent you stayed on with good punches all the way through but please dont ever use a bar like this again

"Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me
You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!!"

that was so basic it was pathetic, but otherwise your punches was good and a couple decent personals the opener was good grabbed my attention and throwin his pic in there made you win
__________________
RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion


Send a message via AIM to FlowIntelligent.