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Voted For: Justify
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ya structure took this, ya had the correct line stretch that made ya punches land nicely, ya personals i didnt get, but no one really takes the time to check links any more, thats my pointer. ya had a good closure, and a nice opener.
best lines:
Cuz your flows wack, and you write in a fuckin paragraph
You just joined and already startin down the wrong path
^^nice bar, ya came hard here. nice job overall.
ya had the win b/c ya structure landed ya punches nicely. hot verse. work on comdey lines, word.
vote: justify.
feedback for Khaos: ya lost.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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