eh ill just explain it

golden-
nigga ill bring dem ak;s out never hesitant to fill u lead
i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said?
u a bitch, ull get sliced more than Italian bread
the last nigga that cracked jokes like u,ended up dead
the barrels explode leavin ya insides GRUDGED like sara michelle gellar
ill get ya BEAN rocked, but i aint talkin bout ROCKAFELLER
man u really got courage, i dont know why u went through this
take a hint we dont like ya crew neebies are useless
u could never trust me nigga, ill get u popped wit ya own gat
my record doesnt mean shit,now u know why niggas gotta fall back

^^okay good verse...you had great punches......flowed good........you had okay wordplay.....coulda been better......you used nigga in your verse more than once so it kinda made me not feel your verse as much cuz there isnt much need to put it in there at all or at most once not more than once...but w/e....you structure was kinda off try and even your lines.....saw no multi's and no metas either so that took off your verse...personals i didnt see any........work on putin some personals multis metas and get better vocab if you had better vocab it woulda been a closer battle....
overall....6/10

requiem-Ima Have to Propel Golden Shell's To Shatter Ya Frame,
Tear Every Line You Produce,Have Ya wallowing In Shame,
Ill Prize Ya Chest Cavatie's from Ya Rib's & Douse Em In Gasoline
Frantic Crie's Echo Out Ya Windpipe,Wheezing Like U Addicted Ta Nicotine
The Dude Still Gets His Dad's Cock Up His ass and Just says its Family Bonding
So Wack He leaves Suicide Letter's In OM and still Theres no one Responding
Ill have ya Vomiting Out Ya rhymes thats the Only way they Gonna be "Sick"
So Go get Raped by ya Dad,Hoe,You've Been Ripped,Go find Another Dick ta Lick.

^^okay very good verse.....you had really good punches just came out ahead of golden in this catagory......you had personals which were good....you verse flowed really nice........great vocab and worplay.......saw multi's which is good.......not really any metas your structure was good...but you def cam out ahead cuz you just overall came harder......just work on directing your personals a lil more like make them easier to understand that its a personal...(add a link) but not bad good drop man
overall 8/10
peace~1

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