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IP:
Voted For: Premanition
Pretty Nice...
This Shit Was Just More Fluent Flowing...
The Other Kid Was Lacking...
Even The Flow Was Off And Hard To Fallow...
On The Whole This Was The Over All Better Piece By Far...
But BOTH Pieces Lack A Real Story...
That Kinda Let Me Down Cuz I Like Stories Better...
They're Alot More Engaging To The Reader...
But Ya...
Prem Goddit...
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