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Voted For: ..Xplicit..
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flywhiteguy: ya verse had no competitive portions, ya structure was off, ya flow wasnt there, ya wordplay didnt show, i didnt see real metas, a few attempted multis, but over all it wasnt even decent, ya tried. its prolly just that ya new.
Xplicit: ya verse had some nice multis, ya structure was aight, i cant say ya lines were stretched cause ya used a different font and size, so i cant rele tell where ya were going with that. but ya personals connected, and ya punches landed, very understandable, ya had a decent opener, the closure was faulty, it only rhymed with an accent. next time make the rhyme scheme obvious, it helps out, trust me. but you definately too this battle, nice job on the punches, and congrats, return the favor, ill get you the link.
vote: Xplicit
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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