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Voted For: e-dubz
spite: man you were just rhyming, i saw no persponals no punches, no scheme, no structure, just wordplay. horrible man. ya need to diss your opponent, ya want to ramble do topicals. cmon you basically gave him the win. its over.
e-dubz:
ya verse had punches, ya verse had personals, ya verse had scheme, ya verse had strucuter, and ya verse was legit. but ya closure was conry. that winney the pooh line, i got it, believe that, but it wasnt rele a diss. seriously. not bad overall though, just work on some creative punches and ya got skill.
vote: e-dubz
return the favor with an honest vote, would be well appreciated.http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=158235
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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